Thesis: The Development of characters having a passive characteristic meaning that they don’t do much and active meaning being active and doing certain things that can affect the story,can directly shape the themes of Fairy Tales like how in Rapunzel she switches from passive to active traits and it influences the Fairy Tales progression and storyline. Thi can affect the character motivations which can lead to plot twists and the audience and reader engagement in the Fairy Tale.

Paragraph 1: I introduce my topic and make it as my thesis statement

Paragraph 2: I give a background on what i am talking about referring to the characters in the Fairy Tale and how it heavily affects the narrative

Paragraph 3: This shows transformation in fairy tales, shows character traits and behaviors that can be changed in a way how it acts and it doesnt follow a role.

Paragrpah 4: It talks about how the change of character traits influences and reshapes the audience and narrative

Paragrpah 5: It talks about Female characters in fantasy and fairy tales who are often stereotyped as passive and submissive, but that passivity can change and turn into negativity which can impact the plot and narrative

Paragrpah 6: It talks about the 3 little pigs and how the pigs roles play a huge part of then narrative and how they act which can impact the story 

Paragrpah 7: It talks about how little red cap changed her ways and learns from her mistakes which leads to an impact in character development which changes the plot of the narrative

Paragrpah 8: It talks about the way how characters are portrayed really affects the audience and kids in these fairy tales

Paragrpah 9: I summarize where my main point stands and make a conclusion about everything that i talk about and relating back to my main idea and thesis

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1. Does every paragraph relate back to your main idea? Yes every paragraph does relate back to my main idea
2. Where might a reader have trouble following the order of your ideas? In the middle of the reading where i just start talk about lots of information
3. Do several of your paragraphs repeat one idea? Maybe 1 or 2 do repeat the same idea
4. Does one paragraph juggle several topics? No, one paragraphs does not juggle several topics
5. Are there any ideas related to your thesis that you have not addressed at all? No, all my ideas relate to my thesis.