The exercise went well for me, I never really did anything like this before with color that represents something in my writing. This was something that I actually never heard about before and it was really nice and fun to do something like this for the first time ever and I actually saw an improvement in the way my writing was.  The insights that it provided was how I was able to have structural writing and have a better understanding of what I have in my writings in terms of the personal narratives. I was able to state when and where in my writing I am talking about action, characterization, reflection, direct quotes, transition sentences and more things like that. I was able to have a mindset where I need to expand more on my writings and evidence. But not only has this made me realize the things I need to improve but it made me realize the things I did right in my writings to stand out more.  The main thing that I will revise in my final draft is being more specific on my writing and evidence and elaborating more and adding more things to my writing. I feel like I still have things to improve on in terms of elaborating. The three things I want to work on in my next assignment is to have better transitions in my writing since i feel like you really never notice a transition in my writings and should improve on that and make that stand out in my sentences, the second things is that i need to elaborate more on the things that I write in terms of details and analysis since i feel like i am too broad, and the third thing is that i need to show more evidence on my writings to back up what i say cause i really don’t be doing that.